What did you do last weekend?

원본)
I was off last Friday. I went to pochen at noon. It took four hours. I was tired when I drove so I stopped the car and slept an hours in the car. I arrived my parent’s house at 2 pm. I parked the car and went to Seoul at 4 pm.

 

I had a football club in my company. It was last meeting day. We had dinner together at 11 pm. I came back home at midnight. I slept all day at Saturday. When I slept, my mom cooked my meals for me. I brought meals and came back Daejeon at 9 am on Sunday.

I put my meals in the refrigerator. and I went to ‘photoism’ to took a picture with my favorite actor frame at 1:30. I have a takgwondo competition this Thursdays so I met my takgwondo friends and we practiced takgwondo 2pm to 5pm.

 

수정)
It was my day off last Friday.I went to pochen at noon. It took four hours. I was tired while I was driving so I stopped the car at a rest area and took a nap for an hour in the car. I arrived at my parents’ house at 2 pm. I parked the car and went to Seoul at 4 pm.

 

I had a football club in my company. It was last meeting day and we had dinner together until 11 pm. So I came back to pochen at midnight. And I slept all day on Saturday. While I was sleeping, my mom cooked banchan for me. I brought them back to Daejeon at 9 am on Sunday.

I put those banchans in the refrigerator. and I went to ‘photoism’ to take a picture with my favorite actor frame at 1:30. I met my takgwondo friends and we practiced takgwondo from 2pm to 5pm. Because  I have a takgwondo competition this Thursdays.